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Write with Mel
Encouragement, tips and writing advice I’ve learned along the way.
How to write a novel that readers won’t DNF
As an author, you’re not only competing with other books and storytellers, you’re competing with other forms of entertainment, like movies and television. Why should a reader finish your book when there is endless entertainment available to them? Writing a book that readers finish isn’t as easy as people make it out to be.
5 key elements for a strong character arc
As a book coach and developmental editor, the biggest mistake I see in manuscripts is a weak character arc. A weak character arc means that readers won't stay invested in your story. As fiction writers, our primary goal is to get readers to the end of our story. That means you need to do whatever you can to get character development right! Your success as a writer depends on it.
Instead of persistence, writers should focus on this
If you’ve ever looked into how to be a successful author or how to get published, you’ve most likely come across the common writing advice that says ‘persistence pays off’. But I want to offer a slightly different perspective. Persistence is important, but it isn’t the key to building a successful writing career, especially now that the book and publishing markets are completely oversaturated.
I’m stepping back from querying
I try to speak about the query process and my own experience trying to get a literary agent as honestly as possible. My goal has always been to be transparent and show just how difficult the industry can be, even when you’ve done all you can to create a great story. Too often, we only see people posting about the wins and the good stuff and it makes us feel like we’re doing something wrong. On that note, I want to be completely honest about where I am right now with my querying.
Why is Lightlark so popular (and how did it get a movie deal before publication)?
Lightlark, a YA fantasy novel written by Alex Aster was a BookTok phenomenon and remained on the NYT bestseller list for over a year. Universal bought the movie rights to Lightlark before the book was even released. Aster is in her 20s and it’s still very early in her writing career to see skyrocketing success. This sounds like every author’s dream come true, so how did it happen?
How to find more time to write
I don’t think there’s a single writer out there who hasn’t felt that they don’t have time to write. More things are demanding our time and attention now than ever. Not only that, writing doesn’t usually pay a living wage, meaning the majority of us are doing it as a side hustle. We’re trying to balance full-time work, families and young children along with the pressures of churning out as many books as possible and marketing them. Honestly, it’s a miracle that anyone succeeds at getting a novel out!
The NaNoWriMo draft revisions to focus on so your story stands out
You’re done NaNoWriMo, now what? National Novel Writing Month is over and regardless of whether you “won” or not, you’re probably relieved! The good news is, it doesn’t matter if you win or lose NaNoWriMo. What matters is what you do next with your draft (no matter how many words you got down).
The mindset challenge that derails your success as an author (It’s not what you think!)
Do you have an unrealistic view of your writing ability? It’s completely normal for writers, but it’s important to be aware of because it can cause a lot of pain and blockage along your writing journey. Nurturing a healthy mindset is crucial for a successful writing life. Our beliefs dictate what we do and how we act, so we need to get them aligned with reality.
Why writers need to care about the reader journey
An author’s job is to please and delight readers. This is the joyful, beautiful, wonderful gift of being a writer. Writing success is directly linked to how well we can engage readers. If you are not considering what a reader experiences when they read your story, then it will be incredibly challenging to figure out how to become a successful author.
Is ‘show, don’t tell’ bad writing advice?
Show, don’t tell is one of the most common pieces of writing feedback you’ll receive as a fiction writer. But besides feeling cliched and overused, is show, don’t tell good writing advice?
My short answer is sometimes. But one thing is certain, it’s given as feedback too often by people who don’t have a clear idea of where and when it’s actually important. This post is aimed to help you understand when and where this advice should be applied.
How to write a novel by working smarter, not harder
Writing a novel is a monumental task! Gone are the days of leisurely writing and being paid a living wage for it. Most writers don’t get paid enough to write full-time. Most writers are balancing full-time jobs, children, school or other family responsibilities. Writing is our side-hustle. That’s why it’s incredibly important to learn how to write smarter, not harder.
Why are Colleen Hoover books so popular?
Colleen Hoover (CoHo) is a romance author and BookTok sensation who has sold over 20 million books. Whether you enjoy her books or hate them, you can’t deny their popularity. So, what can authors learn from CoHo’s writing? I’m going to break down some things Colleen Hoover does really well in her most popular novel It Ends With Us.
Should I participate in NaNoWriMo? Pros and cons of the popular annual writing challenge
This is the time of year when writers start talking about NaNoWriMo. NaNoWriMo stands for National Novel Writing Month which takes place every November. During this annual challenge, writers from all over commit themselves to writing a 50 000 word novel in a single month. The organization offers other smaller challenges throughout the year as well. You may have seen writers talking about it on social media or preparing themselves to participate. If you spend a lot of time in writing communities, you may be feeling pressure to participate yourself. Before you make a decision about whether NaNoWriMo is right for you, here are some important things to consider.
The #1 skill that will help you transform your novel and become a better writer
When I finished writing my first novel, I typed out ‘The End’, patted myself on the back and gleefully sent it out to readers for feedback. It had taken me many years to work up the dedication and willpower to sit down and finish a novel. I was so proud of myself. I thought the hard work was over and I just knew my readers were going to love it. I waited patiently for their feedback, anticipating all the praise that was about to come my way. But instead, what I got back was loads of red lines, including comments about how boring my story was and how unlikeable my main character was.
How to get excited about writing again
At some point, every writer deals with feelings of discouragement and burnout. You may even get to a point where you say I don’t want to write anymore. If you’ve lost your writing mojo, don’t panic! I’m going to give you some ideas on how to make writing fun again. Whatever you do, try to rediscover the joy in writing. Because, guess what? Writing is supposed to be fun! It should fill up and replenish your soul. If you feel depleted and drained, you may be doing it wrong. If you’re wondering how to get excited about writing again, here are four things you can try.
Ignore this type of writing feedback!
Feedback is a necessary part of writing a book. Since your story and characters live in your head, you’re not always going to explain things in ways that someone without the same information can understand. That’s why you need to find a feedback partner who can tell you honestly what’s missing from your story. However, too often feedback can leave us with a mountain of self-doubt, wondering how much of it we should really take into consideration.
Should I give up writing my novel?
Asking questions like, should I keep writing my novel? or should I shelve my manuscript? is something almost every writer faces during their writing journey. But whether you should quit or continue, depends on a few different factors. Blanket advice, like don’t give up, doesn’t always apply. Sometimes we actually need to quit writing a book or at least take an extended break from it. Here are some questions to ask yourself if you feel like giving up on your manuscript:
Analyzing character arcs in Barbie
Whatever your feelings about the Barbie movie, you can’t deny its popularity. But, why is the Barbie movie so popular? Let’s put on our storyteller hats and try to figure that out. My inkling is that it’s the themes of the Barbie movie that resonate so well with so many people (and perhaps infuriate others).
Help! I’m stuck in a writing slump
If writing feels like pulling teeth right now, don’t worry, you’re not alone. We all go through slumps, burnout and periods of discouragement with writing. The good news is there is always a way out. You may not feel excited and inspired every time you write, but a few mindset changes can help you overcome procrastination and long bouts of writer’s block.
How to write a book fast
Improve your writing process with these tips
Everyone has their own writing process and novel writing strategies that work best for them. I’m not here to tell anyone how to write a novel. Okay, maybe I am, but it’s entirely up to you if you want to take my advice and finish writing a novel faster.