Services

Developmental Editing

Give your novel the best chance of getting picked up by readers, agents and publishers

Every writer needs an outside perspective to improve their story. Beta readers are helpful, but they often provide subjective feedback or misdiagnose story problems.

I help writers identify problems through the lens of what makes a good story. The goal is to sharpen characterization, plot, theme, structure and other story elements to fully engage readers.

I always explain why something is not working, and provide possible solutions, holding space for your creativity and vision. My feedback is objective and it’s based on well-established storytelling frameworks.

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First Act Edit

$400 CAD / $297 USD* *Up to 22 500 words

  • 30 minute phone call to learn about your story and goals

  • Some line edits for grammar, punctuation and clarity

  • In-document comments to strengthen plot, theme, characterization, pacing, dialogue and all big picture story elements

  • Editorial letter with details about what is working well and where you might make improvements

  • 30 minute phone call to answer your follow-up questions

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Full Manuscript Edit

$1000 CAD / $744 USD* *Up to 90 000 words

  • 30 minute zoom/phone call to learn about your story and goals

  • Some line edits for grammar, punctuation and clarity

  • In-document comments to strengthen plot, theme, characterization, pacing, dialogue and all big-picture story elements

  • Editorial letter with details about what story elements are working well and where you might make improvements

  • 1 hour phone call to answer your follow-up questions

Book Coaching

Become the skilled and confident author you’ve always dreamed of

My book coaching method helps writers get out of writer’s block, break up the large task of writing a book into actionable steps, finish a book faster, gain craft skills and attract loyal readers.

My coaching method is for any stage of the writing process. I can help you:

  • Go from idea to outline

  • Build a solid outline to make drafting easy

  • Make a project plan to hit a deadline

  • Finish your draft with confidence

  • Make a revision plan based on revisions that actually improve your story

Because every writer faces unique challenges, I’d like to chat with you first to learn about your writing journey. After our FREE 30-minute call, I will send you customized pricing and packages. There’s no commitment or pressure on the call. It’s a chance to see if we’re a good match. I’ll always give you time and space to consider my coaching packages.